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[mammoth]

The composition and rendering are very good, though the values around the mammoth are kinda weak - it blends into the rock (note that the darkest shadows are the ones between objects, so the areas around its feet would be the first to be darkened). Maybe also add some storytelling, as in, what is it looking at, or, how is it feeling at the sight?

Fwkaaaaa responds:

It's not a bad idea to add some kind of narrative, I can think of something more like migration, or something similar, I also think about improving the mountains in the background a bit (removing some detail)

[Shamemaker]

Loving the hatched textures on this!

Dussalopod responds:

thanks !